Appreciate the local context of how the use of information technology has enabled your subject’s survival. You have alluded to ideas of danger and shelter. How would you foreground these themes in your film, so that you can heighten the intensity of survival? How else has technology informed your subject of other aspects of survival, such as food and daily necessities? More research can be done to inform your stand.
Your film has a good start. There are some good moments where you crop and frame your subject, and from the screen to the window, in and out. Your narration is clear and well-articulated. The use of audio can be better curated, to complement the scenes and the emotions you have conveyed in text. Overall, your visuals are well-paced in relation to your narration.
Appreciate the local context of how the use of information technology has enabled your subject’s survival. You have alluded to ideas of danger and shelter. How would you foreground these themes in your film, so that you can heighten the intensity of survival? How else has technology informed your subject of other aspects of survival, such as food and daily necessities? More research can be done to inform your stand.
Your film has a good start. There are some good moments where you crop and frame your subject, and from the screen to the window, in and out. Your narration is clear and well-articulated. The use of audio can be better curated, to complement the scenes and the emotions you have conveyed in text. Overall, your visuals are well-paced in relation to your narration.