Your documentary on the issues faced by deliverymen in South Korea is informative. It is generally well-researched, but needs more local references.
What is special about this “visit”? More visual techniques need to be explored to convey some of the issues and emotions that these deliverymen face while on their job, beyond the elevator button scene. Being consistent with the lighting and timing of the day would also strengthen your narrative. Is the sense of disconnect between the first POV of the visuals and the third POV of the narration intentional? Overall, the reporting style and narration is well-paced.
Your documentary on the issues faced by deliverymen in South Korea is informative. It is generally well-researched, but needs more local references.
What is special about this “visit”? More visual techniques need to be explored to convey some of the issues and emotions that these deliverymen face while on their job, beyond the elevator button scene. Being consistent with the lighting and timing of the day would also strengthen your narrative. Is the sense of disconnect between the first POV of the visuals and the third POV of the narration intentional? Overall, the reporting style and narration is well-paced.